Mont de Marsan, 2nde 10, groupe 2

Once Upon a Time [...]

A princess, named Leila who's lived in a enchanting castle.

[lived]

Leila has very beautiful and has wings for fly above clouds

[was] [had]

[to fly]

[to]

She lived with her father, they loved each other but he protected her too much since her death's mother

So he shut her away with a guard who was a dwarf.

[I have an idea, if we talking about a prince who wanted to steal her wings]

A day, she managed to escape.

[good idea léa !]

[one day]

But, she was caught by a strange men who could transformed him in a fish.

[i think, our history is difficult to reproduce.]

[yes but it's to late no ?]

[Can we write dialogue ?]

(yes, but we can change the characters because is very difficult to reproduce]

[Mayby that will help us]

[maybe]

[ok. we don't change the characters]

[instead of the man change in a fish he can change in a panda because I have a costume of panda so it' more easy]

[yes, it's very cool idea, and he can dance on the song "panda" and he is very funny]

[yes that add absurd in the fairy tale]

[ok]